So I redid Nefertiti after Sheldon's critique and got this:
This was the 2nd half of the process:
I think I like this version a lot better because it has more character. The other one is good for illustrative purposes. There's still a few things I need to fix after what Sheldon corrected. I'll post that one up soon. Then I'll start putting some accessories details and then color! Yay!
Stay tuned for Tut ideations and 113A Black and White rendering!